Love and Other Stuff

debbie b

You need to start off with a thesis statement. It basically tells the reader what the article is about.

Child labor was the product of the Industrial Revolution in the ???. Children worked in the factories and mills in Great Britian and America for long hours and for little pay. There was no law in place to protect children at the time. But in ?? a law was passed to make child labor illegal. I dont know the dates but u probably do, but this is how it should be.

3 years ago

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puzzled?

how about starting with how privileged some kids like u n me r.... n then u cld go on to show how contrasting the lives of the kids who work for each days meals are from ours...

debbie b

You need to start off with a thesis statement. It basically tells the reader what the article is about.

Child labor was the product of the Industrial Revolution in the ???. Children worked in the factories and mills in Great Britian and America for long hours and for little pay. There was no law in place to protect children at the time. But in ?? a law was passed to make child labor illegal. I dont know the dates but u probably do, but this is how it should be.

3 years ago

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.

puzzled?

how about starting with how privileged some kids like u n me r.... n then u cld go on to show how contrasting the lives of the kids who work for each days meals are from ours...