Summarization Progress over the Course

In summarization of your comments you stated that I made a lot of progress over the course of this paper. There in my argument you discuss that there are parts that I need to slow down, and how I need to write down what I want to say. You also state that I do need to concern to read my paper out loud and proof read what I wrote done because doing so would help me understand what I wrote down . I do agree with you one your comments, because I agree that I should slow down and do more proof reading. I do see that they apply specifically to what I have written; I hope to work on applying your suggestions regarding the areas that need improving in my argument, by using them toward my next English class and other classes I will be taking during my college education.

This semester I learned about how to asset the MEAL plan and how to use it during my writing. I also so learned about umbrellas and how to branch them to fit in the argument that I was typing. I did prefer writing about a topic that I got to choose, because it seems a little easier for me to talk about what I thought was important to me. I would prefer research compared to writing, because to me it is more hard core evidence in a research paper then in a writing paper. I have noticed myself going through a process that consist of gathering my thoughts, and preparing myself before sitting down and starting to write my papers. I do prefer to talk to my parents and Mary before, writing my first draft. They help me gather my ideas and help me put down on paper what I am trying to say.

I feel that my writing has improved sum, I can say I now understand how an argument works and how to state a main claim and back it up with the support and links. I think how I improved on understanding how an argument works and how to prove a main claim and to support that main claim. By taking notes in that class while we went over it and by asking for examples on supporting main claims. The things I am still struggling with are umbrellas, how to involve them in to a argument with proving their branches. In my first paper I would state an umbrella and use some of the branches that I thought would work.

In conclusion the aspects of English 15 are very relevant to other classes in college and if you were to get a job that involves you to write a reflection about your job, you would have to use the things you have learned in this class. To be honest I would have to say no, because I don't care for English as long as I can remember. I might use something's from this class for my other classes that I will be taking for my college education. I do see myself using some of the stuff we have learned in class in other classes especially in my English 202 class. I might as will need to refer back to this class when I finally get my job as a judge, especially when I am writing up reports about certain hearings. I did enjoy this class more this time around, I think because I had a good