Compo Correction Olivia Cheng 3a (2)
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Compo Correction Olivia Cheng 3A (2)
Dear Mary,
How are you? I am quite satisfied with the Planet Puck, there are lots of technological things.
Here is no oxygen, although it sounds weird, don't worry, technology can help us. A special gum can solve this problem. When we are chewing this gum, it will provide oxygen to us and we can have a normal life like the one on Earth's!
Time flies, I've been living here for almost 2 years, I miss the Earth seriously. Although the life here might be similar to the one on Earth it certainly has some differences. Be frank, I really want to change the faces of the people here. I do spend lots of time on identify them since they have the same face! But the point is they are ugly, I hate living with lots of aliens.
Second, it is dark here in the whole day, since it is far away from the sun. We don't have sun light here. We always have to hold a lamp, it is strongly inconvenience! If I have the ability, I want to move Planet Puck nearer to the sun, somewhere beside the Earth will be alright.
Lastly, I may increase the time to 48 hours per day in this planet. I long for a longer time, as I want to explore more the technological things here, 24 hours is not enough for me to enjoy them.
Hey Mary, do you want to experience the live here? I miss you a lot, hope we will meet in the near future!
Love from,
Chris Wong
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