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Student’s name:  Hoang , LA SON ( ID: 100919188)

Target Outcomes: 2, 3, 4.

Description:

Creating an outline is a crucial skill in college-level writing. An outline will help you organize your thoughts and evidence effectively, which in turn will facilitate the actual writing of your essay.

Create an outline for your four-paragraph comparison essay on one of the following topics

  1. Two sustainable fish farms
  2. Two celebrity chefs
  3. Two kinds of the same beverage
  4. Two special event venues
  5. Two tourist destinations or destination packages

Use your notes from the screening and/or from your research. Make sure you write clearly. Your sentences can be short, but please make them as complete as possible. (You can change your topic and ideas when you start working on the actual essay, but you will still have to follow this template.)

Evaluation: Weight: 10%.

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  1. Your thesis sentence states the two subjects to be compared and three specific points of comparison between these subjects, based on the screening and/or research.

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  1. Your body paragraphs follow the order of two points of comparison stated in the intro and develop them in brief detail with potential supporting quotes or paraphrases to be used later in your essay. Give stats and/or examples that make it clear how the two subjects compare according to that specific point of comparison.

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  1. Your points of comparison announced in the intro and developed in the two main paragraphs are connected.

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  1. Your outline uses grammatically correct language.

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  1. Your conclusion not only recaps the two points of comparison but offers recommendations as to which of the two subjects compared would be a better choice overall.

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Total

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INTRO – Attention getter.  

Nowadays, people have many choices to make a plan for their trip and sometime people get struggle for the way to go.

Thesis (your two subjects to be compared and the three specific points of comparison).

There are many differences between independent travel and group travel, including, planning and costing

BODY PARAGRAPH 1 – Topic sentence: state first subject and all points of comparison.

      At the beginning, independent travel make people feel more freedom and they can mange your trip planning by the way they want.  

Supporting evidence for first subject.

- The place to visit.

First of all, the place to go is the most important thing that the independent travel have to decide for their own trip base on personal attitude, expectation and language. Their attitude decide where they want to go and what they want to do or which things they want to join in the trip. Also, base on the expectation, the independt travel will be easy to get what the reality will be. In additional, Indepent travel shoule be know that Language is an important thing for their trip. For example, if you travel to Chinese by yourself and you don't know any Chinese language, such as Mandarin or Cantonese, you can't explore any special things in there. And in the bad situation, you will got a lots of trouble. So, Independend travel should be check language information about the place they decide to go.

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